Friday, April 29, 2011

Hard News Final Edit

Last week on Wednesday we here at Eastview experienced a very intense and very real incident that not many school around our area experience. This incident involved the Apple Valley Police and the Dakota County sheriff’s department. And in an interview with school officials they said that at this point in time they cannot directly comment on this event due to the sensitivity of the people involved
 The school took swift and decisive action in maintaining the safety of the students and in apprehending those responsible.  And while this incident may have left some students angry or scared there are schools in the area that haven’t been so lucky. This incident that the Eastview community is well aware of has been taken care of and students are in no more danger. While this story was to cover this event specifically it is more important that we are all aware of how to prevent this event from occurring again.
Schools even around our area have higher crime statistics than we here at Eastview do. For instance Eagan and Apple Valley High school have higher crime rates per year than Eastview does. This is due in part to the student to teacher ratio.
But in an interview Doug Baird (Apple Valley Police Department) he states that this is also due in part to the socioeconomics of the Eastview High School community. Socioeconomics being the social status of the students and faculty attending and working presently in a given area, in this case a high school. He states that when looking at statistics for high schools around the nation and in Minnesota you have to let quite a few factors be played out in your thought process as well. Things like; socioeconomics, class sizes, community awareness, and many other factors.
Something that is also important is being able to prevent these events from being happening in the future.
 In an interview Dr. Randall Peterson (Eastview’s Principle) he stated that even though Eastview is an “outlier” in terms of violence that occurs every year the thing that makes “Eastview the way it is, is due to the open and honest communication we have with our students and with our student’s parents. And that we encourage both parents and students to never hesitate to communicate with the administration here at Eastview”
Also in Doug Baird’s interview he states that our best line of defense against violent behavior is to be aware of the feelings of others. While something may not affect you, you never know how it can affect others and how they will react may not be what you expect. He also said in his interview to “talk to people”
If someone looks sad or upset talk to them about it and try to find out what happened and to encourage them to keep their head up and talk to someone about it. Whether that person is a trusted adult or school administrator, but just talking to someone has proved that violent behavior can be avoided in most cases.
According to the youth violence website crime rates in schools per one thousand students has been progressively going down over the last ten years and that statistic is proven everyday at Eastview. With one of the lowest crime rates in the state the students can walk the halls in peace and know that their school is one of learning and advancement not one of violence and hate. And while serious events do occur like the one last week, they are rare to say the least and an event like that one will be prevented in the future, due to the knowledge gained by this event. Students are the first line of defense against violent behavior in school and students should do their part and report anything that is suspicious in any way.
Thursday, April 28, 2011

Edits

I edited Molly D's paper and Diego P's Paper

Thursday, April 28, 2011

High School Violence

Last week on Wednesday we here at Eastview experienced a very intense and very real incident that not many school around our area experience. This incident involved the Apple Valley Police and the Dakota County sheriff’s department. And in an interview with school officials they said that at this point in time they cannot directly comment on this event due to the sensitivity of the people involve
 The school took swift and decisive action in maintaining the safety of the students and in apprehending those responsible.  And while this incident may have left some students angry or scared there are schools in the area that haven’t been so lucky. This incident that the Eastview community is well aware of has been taken care of and students are in no more danger. While this story was to cover this event specifically it is more important that we are all aware of how to prevent this event from occurring again.
Schools even around our area have higher crime statistics than we here at Eastview do. For instance Eagan and Apple Valley High school have higher crime rates per year than Eastview does. This is due in part to the student to teacher ratio.
But in an interview Doug Baird (Apple Valley Police Department) he states that this is also due in part to the socioeconomics of the Eastview High School community. He states that when looking at statistics for high schools around the nation and in Minnesota you have to let quite a few factors be played out in your thought process as well. Things like; socioeconomics, class sizes, community awareness, and many other factors.
Something that is also important is being able to prevent these events from being happening in the future.
 In an interview Dr. Randall Peterson (Eastview’s Principle) he stated that even though Eastview is an “outlier” in terms of violence that occurs every year the thing that makes “Eastview the way it is is due to the open and honest communication we have with our students and with our student’s parents. And that we encourage both parents and students to never hesitate to communicate with the administration here at Eastview”
Also in Doug Baird’s interview he states that our best line of defense against violent behavior is to be aware of the feelings of others. While something may not affect you, you never know how it can effect others and how they will react may not be what you expect. He also said in his interview to “talk to people”
If someone looks sad or upset talk to them about it and try to find out what happened and to encourage them to keep their head up and talk to someone about it. Whether that person is a trusted adult or school administrator, but just talking to someone has proved that violent behavior can be avoided in most cases.
According to the youth violence website crime rates in schools per one thousand students has been progressively going down over the last ten years and that statistic is proven everyday at Eastview. With one of the lowest crime rates in the state the students can walk the halls in peace and know that their school is one of learning and advancement not one of violence and hate. And while serious events do occur like the one last week, they are rare to say the least and an event like that one will be prevented in the future, due to the knowledge gained by this event. Students are the first line of defense against violent behavior in school and students should do their part and report anything that is suspicious in any way.

Tuesday, April 26, 2011

Interview Questions

How were you invloved with this event?
What steps did you take after hearing about this security threat?
What can we do as students to help prevent this kind of event in the future?
How does this event compare to other events in the past?
Have you experienced this sort of event before either here at EV or outside?

Monday, April 25, 2011

Upcoming Hard News Story

I will be writing a story on the increased amount of security that is being added to the Royal wedding. I will be interviewing security personal here at the school to gain insight on how security is run here compared to how it is going to be run at the Royal wedding and write on how security can be improved here in the opinion of the security personal here at Eastview

Hard News Notes

1) Around 600 words
2) Starts with a summary of the lead (the who what when where why and how)
3) Soft news is anything that is not time sensitive
4) A feature story is normally twice is long as a hard news story
5) The 5 "W's" should be in the first five sentences of your story
6) A lead is normally your words not other people's
7) Make sure you convey the emotion of the story as well as the senses in the story, you are the eyes and ears so bring the reader into the story

Wednesday, April 20, 2011

Bill of Rights notes

1. What are the 5 freedoms of the 1st amendment?
Speech,Press,Religion,Petition,Assembly

2. What is the Tinker Standard?
student speech cannot be censored as long as it does not "materially disrupt class or work or involve substantial disorder or invasion of the rights of others." this was the first court case that was in favor of students.
3. What is the Frasier Standard?

because school officials have an interest in teaching students the boundaries of socially appropriate behavior" they can censor student's speech that is vulgar or indecent, even if it does not cause a "material or substantial disruption"
4. What is the Hazelwood Standard?

Censorship of school sponsored student expression is permissible when school officials can show that it is "reasonably related to legitimate pedagogical concerns."
5. What is the Frederick Standard?
If you are on a school authorized event you are still under school jurisdiction

6. What is the definition of libel?

you cannot lie about anyone on any public website or in any form of publication. nor can you falsify any information about any group organization or individual by written communication as well.

Monday, April 18, 2011

News Notes

Definition:
Define “Journalism” in 1-3 sentences.

The telling of current events that are news worthy through writing of news papers, magazines and the Internet.

TITLE DESCRIPTION
 EXAMPLE1 Timeliness. How current the current event is. Sports scores, and the weather. 2. Prominence. We care about famous paper. Barack Obama buying a new dog

3. Proximity. How close something is to us. Local weather and current events and traffic.

4. Significance. The more people that are impacted by it.  Hurricane Katrina

5. Un-usualness. How uncommon things are. Serial killers, house fires.

6. Human interest. Feel-Good stories. A panda bear being born at the zoo.







What are the advantages of print journalism?
1. The stories go into much more detail than in the broadcast journalism.


2. You control what you learn in the news.

3.  More portable than broadcast journalism.



What are the advantages of broadcast journalism?
1. Much more current than print journalism.

2. Live video feed.

3. You can gain access to it anywhere.


Why has online journalism (convergent media) become so popular?
It takes the best of print journalism and broadcast journalism and combines them in one place.