End of Class

In the movie we just finished "Shattered Glass" Stephen Glass is a writer for the "New Republic" magazine and is doing very well. When there is a editor change made within the building things start to not add up when an online magazine company tries to verify Stepehen's sources. They turn up to not exist and that the few things that they can confirm, in the end, also turn up to be fabricated by Stephen himself. This movie is a good light suspence puzzle movie. I enjoyed it very much and I would strongly recomend it to anyone who is going into the journalism field because in the movie it does show in great detail on how a piece is made and the process of which it should happen. This is a good movie and I want to watch it again.

Journalism Media studies is a great class to take. It has taught me a lot about the media and how things are changing at the same time as showing me on how it used to be when magazines and newspapers used to play a bigger role in our society. This class amongst the other classes I have taken with Mr. Krebs have been a lot of fun! He has made the gloom and doom of school and the day-to-day seem more bearable and I actually look forward to his class everyday. I hope that he will continue to bring the same enjoyment into his new students at Burnsville next year as he has in past years here at Eastview. I would take his class over and over again just to have the enjoyment of learning and a workable fun environment.

Hard News Story

Hard News Story PG2

Feature Story

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peer edits

Molly Deziekan
Kiersten Krause

Pre questions

1.    What is a problem/issue that our entire student body (our school, community, country, etc.) faces today? The government being corrupted

2. What is your view/position on the problem or situation?

I believe that the government could be very corrupt but I feel like the government doesn’t give us the whole story

3. What would you like to achieve with your editorial? (What is the desired result?)
to make people aware of how corrupt the government is
4. How will you persuade your audience to adopt your viewpoint as theirs? List at least 4 persuasive points.

Giving hard evidence

Presenting situations where the whole story wasn’t given.

The president giving conflicting statements

Corruption in Congress

5. How will you motivate your readership to action in your conclusion?

6. How will your editorial serve a public purpose?to make people aware of what is going on in the government

Feature story final

In today’s economy everything is becoming more and more difficult to buy. Everyone, no matter what area of life they are in, is starting to feel the pain. While everything is increasing in price,  gas is no different. And while all of us still have to swallow the price it would be nice to know that gas companies are feeling the same economic stress that all of us are feeling. Sadly, it appears that this is not the case.

According to the Wall Street Journal in an interview with Barack Obama “The attorney general is putting together a team whose job it is to root out any cases of fraud or manipulation in the oil markets that might affect gas prices, and that includes the role of traders and speculators.” The job of this task force in short is to make sure that gas companies don’t take advantage of certain situations that may arise in the Middle East, and raise prices on gas due to those situations even when the price per barrel doesn’t increase.

We all have realized that the prices at the pump are continuously on the rise, but what some of us may not realize is that gas companies are filing record highs this year and last. According to Seekingalpha.com Exxon Mobile reported that their first quarter profits went up a whopping 69% to 10.7 billion dollars from the same quarter one year ago. And this happening when we all thought the price per barrel was going up, so how can one of the largest gasoline and oil companies in the world be pushing record high profits?

 The government is thinking  that gas companies are recognizing that when there are conflicts in the Middle East their initial thoughts are “gas prices are going to go up” and gas companies are taking advantage of this by raising the prices even if the price per barrel doesn’t go up.

In interviews with other major gas companies, they are claiming that their profits are due mainly to the huge increase in crude oil, but we as consumers are still scratching our heads trying to figure out how that works. There is much debate among consumers on what the company’s justification is and how that differs from their thoughts.

In interviews with officials at Eastview High School people were saying that “gas companies have limits as to how high their price can be, but many times that max price is set above what the cost of a barrel of oil cost making it possible for gas companies to have record high profits for the year”.  Then, in another interview it was stated that gas companies are just “greedy”.

While some of us are affected more by the rising gas prices all of us feel the effects elsewhere. Food is becoming increasingly expensive, and not due to shortages in the food but mainly due to the raising costs to ship the food. And we’re also feeling it in flight as well. While the price of gasoline increases, the price of jet fuel is also rising. When I, personally had to take a flight to Europe not that long ago, at the last minute (two weeks before I left) the airline contacted me saying that there was going to be a new fuel fee that was going to be added to my ticket cost and if I wanted to fly with them this fee had to be paid before I took off. This new stressor on jet fuel has many companies in a panic and in financial trouble because they aren’t able to send as many employees on as many business related trips. Which means that some vital elements of their business, such as those that take place over seas, are becoming more  difficult to manage. This new effect may have a positive outlook on Americans however. This means that more jobs are going to be localized and there will be less need to depend on foreign operations. And at the same time this means less travel and less need for jet fuel.

One thing that also has Americans questioning our oil prices is the nation’s oil reserve. This reserve holds enough crude oil to meet the nation’s needs for up to 75 days. Using this resource that we have could reduce gas prices significantly and possibly save the U.S from going into a deeper recession. However according to The Week magazine it is stated that this action is not yet needed but may become a need in the very near future. “Barack Obama has been addressing this issue however has taken no action in that direction quite yet,” The Week .

Another thing that may help reduce our oil crisis is this so called “untapped oil” source found in oil shale in Wyoming and in Colorado. This shale is a type of sedimentary rock and could possibly hold up to 1 trillion barrels worth of crude oil and could reduce our dependency on foreign nations for oil significantly. This research is still being done but could reveal a huge change in American lives very soon.

When asked if gas companies should be allowed to have such record high profits this year there were two answers. Yes, and no. some people said that the companies don’t control the prices and others said that there are people having to choose between working and eating due to the fact that they can’t afford to drive themselves to work. And while it is a gray area on whether or not gas companies are raising prices for their own gain or just because their so called quotas are being raised it does not take away from the fact that there could potentially be unnecessary price rising.

Another angle that some are taking on this is “is the conflict in the middle east really affecting our gas prices?” well the answer to this question many times is “I don’t know”.  While we all know that much of our nation’s oil comes from distributors in the Middle East many of us aren’t aware of how much our price at the pump is affected by that. In fact the U.S maintains control of these distributors in the Middle East and that these countries in the Middle East are compliant and work with American officials to keep prices down. So why do our prices continue to sky rocket if this is the case? Well there is one word that comes to mind when I am asked this question,greed. Gas companies are taking advantage of these conflicts in the Middle East. And as  stated before people have this mindset that when there is a conflict in the Middle East people always divert to the thought that there should be a rise in gas price.  While companies take high advantage of that thought pattern and raise prices. In short we as consumers are paying higher prices at the pump just for our thoughts, and we are paying heavily.

Overall, the conflict with gas prices is one that is not going to solve itself. Everything that can be done is being done to lower our prices at the pump and to keep gas companies from swindling us out of our wallets. Barack Obama is playing out different scenarios on how we can use alternative fuel sources and even see about tapping into our oil reserve and even start drilling for oil shale in the Midwest states. That in and of itself could save this nation millions of dollars in gas and take away our dependency on foreign nations for our oil and lessen the chance of our nation going back into a deep recession.

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Feature Story DRAFT

In today’s economy everything is becoming more and more difficult to buy. And everyone, no matter what area of life they are in is starting to feel the pain. While everything is increasing in price gas is no different. And while all of us still have to swallow the price it would be nice to know that gas companies are feeling the same economic stress that all of us are feeling. Sadly it appears that this is not the case.

According to the Wall Street Journal in an interview with Barack Obama “The attorney general is putting together a team whose job it is to root out any cases of fraud or manipulation in the oil markets that might affect gas prices, and that includes the role of traders and speculators.” The job of this task force in short is to make sure that gas companies don’t take advantage of certain situations that may arise in the Middle East, and raise prices on gas due to those situations even when the price per barrel doesn’t increase.

We all have realized that the prices at the pump are continuously on the rise but what some of us may not realize is that gas companies are filing record highs this year and last. According to Seekingalpha.com Exxon Mobile reported that their first quarter profits went up a whopping 69% to 10.7 billion dollars from the same quarter one year ago. And this happening when we all thought the price per barrel was going up, so how can one of the largest gasoline and oil companies in the world be pushing record high profits?

Some of what the government is thinking is that gas companies are recognizing that when there are conflicts in the Middle East their initial thoughts are “gas prices are going to go up” and gas companies are taking advantage of this by raising the prices even if the price per barrel doesn’t go up.

In interviews with other major gas companies, they are claiming that their profits are due mainly to the huge increase in crude oil but we as consumers are still scratching our heads trying to figure out how that works. There is much debate among consumers on what the company’s justification is and how that differs from their thoughts.

In interviews with officials at Eastview High School people were saying that “gas companies have limits as to how high their price can be but many times that max price is set above what the cost of a barrel of oil cost making it possible for gas companies to have record high profits for the year”. And in another interview it was stated that gas companies are just “greedy”.

While some of us are affected more by the rising gas prices all of us feel the effects elsewhere. Food is becoming increasingly expensive, and not due to shortages in the food but mainly due to the raising costs to ship the food. And we’re also feeling it in flight as well. While the price of gasoline increases, the price of jet fuel is also rising. For me personally when I had to take a flight to Europe not that long ago, at the last minute (two weeks before I left) the airline contacted me saying that there was going to be a new fuel fee that was going to be added to my ticket cost and if I wanted to fly with them this fee had to be paid before I took off. This new stressor on jet fuel has many companies in a panic and in financial trouble because they aren’t able to send as many employees on as many business related trips. Which means that some vital elements of their business, such as those that take place over seas, are becoming more and more difficult to manage, This new effect may have a positive outlook on Americans however. This means that more jobs are going to be localized and there will be less need to depend on foreign operations. And at the same time this means less travel and less need for jet fuel.

One thing that also has Americans questioning our oil prices is the nation’s oil reserve. This reserve holds enough crude oil to meet the nation’s needs for up to 75 days. Using this resource that we have could reduce gas prices significantly and possibly save the U.S from going into a deeper recession. However according to The Week magazine it is stated that this action is not yet needed but may become a need in the very near future. “Barack Obama has been addressing this issue however has taken no action in that direction quite yet.” The Week

Another thing that may help reduce our oil crisis is this so called “untapped oil” source found in oil shale in Wyoming and in Colorado. This shale is a type of sedimentary rock and could possibly hold up to 1 trillion barrels worth of crude oil and could reduce our dependency on foreign nations for oil significantly. This research is still being done but could reveal a huge change in American lives very soon.

When asked if gas companies should be allowed to have such record high profits this year there were two answers. Yes, and no. some people said that the companies don’t control the prices and others said that there are people having to choose between working and eating due to the fact that they can’t afford to drive themselves to work. And while it is a gray area on whether or not gas companies are raising prices for their own gain or just because their so called quotas are being raised it does not take away from the fact that there could potentially be unnecessary price rising.

Another angle that some are taking on this is “is the conflict in the middle east really affecting our gas prices?” well the answer to this question many times is “I don’t know”.  While we all know that much of our nation’s oil comes from distributors in the Middle East many of us aren’t aware of how much our price at the pump is affected by that. In fact the U.S maintains control of these distributors in the Middle East and that these countries in the Middle East are compliant and work with American officials to keep prices down. So why do our prices continue to sky rocket if this is the case? Well there is one word that comes to mind when I am asked this question. Greed. Gas companies are taking advantage of these conflicts in the Middle East. And as was stated before people have this mindset that when there is a conflict in the Middle East people always divert to the thought that there should be a rise in gas price. And companies take high advantage of that thought pattern and raise prices. In short we as consumers are paying higher prices at the pump just for our thoughts, and we are paying heavily.

Overall the conflict with gas prices is one that is not going to solve itself. Everything that can be done is being done to lower our prices at the pump and to keep gas companies from swindling us out of our wallets. Barack Obama is playing out different scenarios on how we can use alternative fuel sources and even see about tapping into our oil reserve and even start drilling for oil shale in the Midwest states. That in and of itself could save this nation millions of dollars in gas and take away our dependency on foreign nations for our oil and lessen the chance of our nation going back into a deep recession.

Feature Story Interview Questions

1) How do the rising gas prices affect you?

2) Do you think it's fair that the president is commenting on how high the gas prices are when he doesn't pay for gas himself?

3) Do you think its fair that gas companies are filing record high profits for this year?

4) Why do you think these gas companies can file such record highs? what do you think their justification is?

Feature Story

Gas prices and Gas company profits made

Hard News Final Edit

High School Violence

Last week on Wednesday we here at Eastview experienced a very intense and very real incident that not many school around our area experience. This incident involved the Apple Valley Police and the Dakota County sheriff’s department. And in an interview with school officials they said that at this point in time they cannot directly comment on this event due to the sensitivity of the people involved

 The school took swift and decisive action in maintaining the safety of the students and in apprehending those responsible.  And while this incident may have left some students angry or scared there are schools in the area that haven’t been so lucky. This incident that the Eastview community is well aware of has been taken care of and students are in no more danger. While this story was to cover this event specifically it is more important that we are all aware of how to prevent this event from occurring again.

Schools even around our area have higher crime statistics than we here at Eastview do. For instance Eagan and Apple Valley High school have higher crime rates per year than Eastview does. This is due in part to the student to teacher ratio.

But in an interview Doug Baird (Apple Valley Police Department) he states that this is also due in part to the socioeconomics of the Eastview High School community. Socioeconomics being the social status of the students and faculty attending and working presently in a given area, in this case a high school. He states that when looking at statistics for high schools around the nation and in Minnesota you have to let quite a few factors be played out in your thought process as well. Things like; socioeconomics, class sizes, community awareness, and many other factors.

Something that is also important is being able to prevent these events from being happening in the future.

 In an interview Dr. Randall Peterson (Eastview’s Principle) he stated that even though Eastview is an “outlier” in terms of violence that occurs every year the thing that makes “Eastview the way it is, is due to the open and honest communication we have with our students and with our student’s parents. And that we encourage both parents and students to never hesitate to communicate with the administration here at Eastview”

Also in Doug Baird’s interview he states that our best line of defense against violent behavior is to be aware of the feelings of others. While something may not affect you, you never know how it can affect others and how they will react may not be what you expect. He also said in his interview to “talk to people”

If someone looks sad or upset talk to them about it and try to find out what happened and to encourage them to keep their head up and talk to someone about it. Whether that person is a trusted adult or school administrator, but just talking to someone has proved that violent behavior can be avoided in most cases.

According to the youth violence website crime rates in schools per one thousand students has been progressively going down over the last ten years and that statistic is proven everyday at Eastview. With one of the lowest crime rates in the state the students can walk the halls in peace and know that their school is one of learning and advancement not one of violence and hate. And while serious events do occur like the one last week, they are rare to say the least and an event like that one will be prevented in the future, due to the knowledge gained by this event. Students are the first line of defense against violent behavior in school and students should do their part and report anything that is suspicious in any way.

Thursday, April 28, 2011

Edits

I edited Molly D's paper and Diego P's Paper

High School Violence

Last week on Wednesday we here at Eastview experienced a very intense and very real incident that not many school around our area experience. This incident involved the Apple Valley Police and the Dakota County sheriff’s department. And in an interview with school officials they said that at this point in time they cannot directly comment on this event due to the sensitivity of the people involve

 The school took swift and decisive action in maintaining the safety of the students and in apprehending those responsible.  And while this incident may have left some students angry or scared there are schools in the area that haven’t been so lucky. This incident that the Eastview community is well aware of has been taken care of and students are in no more danger. While this story was to cover this event specifically it is more important that we are all aware of how to prevent this event from occurring again.

Schools even around our area have higher crime statistics than we here at Eastview do. For instance Eagan and Apple Valley High school have higher crime rates per year than Eastview does. This is due in part to the student to teacher ratio.

But in an interview Doug Baird (Apple Valley Police Department) he states that this is also due in part to the socioeconomics of the Eastview High School community. He states that when looking at statistics for high schools around the nation and in Minnesota you have to let quite a few factors be played out in your thought process as well. Things like; socioeconomics, class sizes, community awareness, and many other factors.

Something that is also important is being able to prevent these events from being happening in the future.

 In an interview Dr. Randall Peterson (Eastview’s Principle) he stated that even though Eastview is an “outlier” in terms of violence that occurs every year the thing that makes “Eastview the way it is is due to the open and honest communication we have with our students and with our student’s parents. And that we encourage both parents and students to never hesitate to communicate with the administration here at Eastview”

Also in Doug Baird’s interview he states that our best line of defense against violent behavior is to be aware of the feelings of others. While something may not affect you, you never know how it can effect others and how they will react may not be what you expect. He also said in his interview to “talk to people”

If someone looks sad or upset talk to them about it and try to find out what happened and to encourage them to keep their head up and talk to someone about it. Whether that person is a trusted adult or school administrator, but just talking to someone has proved that violent behavior can be avoided in most cases.

According to the youth violence website crime rates in schools per one thousand students has been progressively going down over the last ten years and that statistic is proven everyday at Eastview. With one of the lowest crime rates in the state the students can walk the halls in peace and know that their school is one of learning and advancement not one of violence and hate. And while serious events do occur like the one last week, they are rare to say the least and an event like that one will be prevented in the future, due to the knowledge gained by this event. Students are the first line of defense against violent behavior in school and students should do their part and report anything that is suspicious in any way.

Interview Questions

How were you invloved with this event?
What steps did you take after hearing about this security threat?
What can we do as students to help prevent this kind of event in the future?
How does this event compare to other events in the past?
Have you experienced this sort of event before either here at EV or outside?

Upcoming Hard News Story

I will be writing a story on the increased amount of security that is being added to the Royal wedding. I will be interviewing security personal here at the school to gain insight on how security is run here compared to how it is going to be run at the Royal wedding and write on how security can be improved here in the opinion of the security personal here at Eastview

Hard News Notes

1) Around 600 words
2) Starts with a summary of the lead (the who what when where why and how)
3) Soft news is anything that is not time sensitive
4) A feature story is normally twice is long as a hard news story
5) The 5 "W's" should be in the first five sentences of your story
6) A lead is normally your words not other people's
7) Make sure you convey the emotion of the story as well as the senses in the story, you are the eyes and ears so bring the reader into the story

Bill of Rights notes

1. What are the 5 freedoms of the 1st amendment?
Speech,Press,Religion,Petition,Assembly

2. What is the Tinker Standard?
student speech cannot be censored as long as it does not "materially disrupt class or work or involve substantial disorder or invasion of the rights of others." this was the first court case that was in favor of students.
3. What is the Frasier Standard?
because school officials have an interest in teaching students the boundaries of socially appropriate behavior" they can censor student's speech that is vulgar or indecent, even if it does not cause a "material or substantial disruption"
4. What is the Hazelwood Standard?
Censorship of school sponsored student expression is permissible when school officials can show that it is "reasonably related to legitimate pedagogical concerns."
5. What is the Frederick Standard?
If you are on a school authorized event you are still under school jurisdiction

6. What is the definition of libel?
you cannot lie about anyone on any public website or in any form of publication. nor can you falsify any information about any group organization or individual by written communication as well.

News Notes

Definition:
Define “Journalism” in 1-3 sentences.
The telling of current events that are news worthy through writing of news papers, magazines and the Internet.

TITLE DESCRIPTION
 EXAMPLE1 Timeliness. How current the current event is. Sports scores, and the weather. 2. Prominence. We care about famous paper. Barack Obama buying a new dog

3. Proximity. How close something is to us. Local weather and current events and traffic.

4. Significance. The more people that are impacted by it.  Hurricane Katrina

5. Un-usualness. How uncommon things are. Serial killers, house fires.

6. Human interest. Feel-Good stories. A panda bear being born at the zoo.






What are the advantages of print journalism?
1. The stories go into much more detail than in the broadcast journalism.


2. You control what you learn in the news.

3.  More portable than broadcast journalism.


What are the advantages of broadcast journalism?
1. Much more current than print journalism.

2. Live video feed.

3. You can gain access to it anywhere.

Why has online journalism (convergent media) become so popular?
It takes the best of print journalism and broadcast journalism and combines them in one place.